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I said alot of things,
Not all of them were true.
I lied about my feelings,
I once said : ''I love you.''

When those words crossed my lips,
They were empty and wrong.
I made a lot of slips,
And hurted you along.

Sorry for all I did.
I know it sounds crappy,
Sounds so bad like a kid.
I hope you'll forgive me.

I love you and that's all,
You may trust me or not.
To you, it may be small,
But to me, it means a lot.
©2007-2009 ~Supah-Ayu
:iconsupah-ayu:

Author's Comments

I wrote this for the boy I love, as you can see. I couldn't draw it so I wrote it. Yeah, it's a song, I have the beat and everything in my head when I read it (though I'm too shy to sing it out loud ...). I don't really like how it turned out ... but I couldn't write it better. I know it won't change anything to the situation, but I had to express how I feel.
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I messed up a bit with the categories, I know.

Second attemp to english poetry ... critz plz!

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:icondomnodragon:
hey, nice work!

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smile, and the world smiles with you...
:iconfensulfr:
It expresses things perfectly...
You couldn't have said it any better...
Keep this safe, and cherish it forever...
And most of all...
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...
Don't let the ferret eat it.

Je t'aime ma petite Ayu,

I hope you'll forgive me for all I've said,
And all I've done. :raincloud:

For now I'll say goodbye, but tonight, I'll say Hello,
And for the time between...
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~Je danse sur les nuages~
:iconsupah-ayu:
I'll keep this safe don't worry, the ferret won't get near it ^^

I love you so much ...

There's nothing to forget ... you were right ...

I love you, I love you, I LOVE YOU <3333333333

One more time xD

Ai shiteiru :heart:

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:: I don't want my love to go to waste, I want you and your beautiful soul :: <333 ~fensulfr
:iconsupah-ayu:
Thank you ^^

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:: I don't want my love to go to waste, I want you and your beautiful soul :: <333 ~fensulfr
:iconpooie00:
Makes me feel sadness....

You write better than meeeeee

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(°˄°;) (˟∆˟;)
:iconsupah-ayu:
NO I DON'T D:

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:: I don't want my love to go to waste, I want you and your beautiful soul :: <333 ~fensulfr

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